I find the typography and colors quite attractive, though two things bother me. I understand the use of the brackets for emphasis but the brackets stand out so much that it breaks the textblock as well as the sentence. I would make the brackets a bit smaller and maybe use a lighter font. The other thing which bothers me is an issue with the content. After "at all" there should be no comma. You can either use a semicolon, an em dash or a dot and give "they" a capital letter. To avoid confusion, here are the options typed out: no boundaries at all; they are always daydreaming no boundaries at all — they are always daydreaming no boundaries at all. They are always daydreaming
I see what you mean and you are right about the design, such wise advice you gave me...but I don't think I'm allow to edit my entry now due to the fact that the deadline for this contest was May 15th. I guess I couldn't see the forest for the trees. Anyway, thank you so much for your feedback, I really appreciate it! It makes me wanna try harder and improve day by day!